6 November 2011

The production diary !!

Shooting Schedule !!
- It did change a bit .... We were meant to be filming on the 19th October at Netley beach but that didn't happen due to people saying they were busy and they had work so fair enough with the work bit but people just saying there busy without a reason is'nt that good its just like they weren't that bothered about it really .  Then we arranged another day to film but people couldn't do those days so it was getting ridiculous now . Now we've left everything to the last minute !! We started filming on the 2nd November which was down to me as I had to text them the day before to get it sorted out which took ages for everyone to agree . It had to be done so I had to do something about it ( I wished sooner.) So we filmed at Lee on Solent beach which would be allot easier and we could film all day which we did . Still that day we all went together to Lee on the Solent beach except one. So we had to wait for her for her about 2 hours till she got there . We needed to film altogether to shoot the scenes , so it was a bit of wait .I thought it be a good idea to go to the bottom end of Lee on Solent as there is sand down there. But people couldn't be bothered to walk down the end which wasn't too far but it was very windy as the weather wasn't too good that day.

 A problem did occur when we were filming, the wind that day was very strong and very blowy too . So we had to work away around the wind but it didn't do us much good. Another problem that has occurred we still have two scenes left to do but in the studio which is a problem as the other year are doing there TV quiz shows , and that lot so its going to be hard to use the studio.We may probably have think of filming in a different location. Also we forgot our storyboards , we needed them to find out what the shots were for each scene . So we may not have the right camera shots we put into our children's drama that were on our storyboard . So that's messed it up a bit. When we did film we did use variety of camera angles which is good to use lots of different shots . Some points of filming when you listen back to it you can't really hear it as it's a bit quiet or the wind taking over control so ill have to see about sorting the sounding levels out .

Designing the set (spaceship )
We started this before half-term. We used cardboard boxes that Shannon brought it for us to use. All we needed is some ideas to come up with of what to go onto our spaceship so for e.g designs. We needed to get some paint which we got in town and from the art department. The ideas we came up with was aliens plants to have to stand up with a piece cardboard at the bottom for it to stand up on . We painted the plants and we stuck these ball things on which we got in a jar, we used them to make it look different. We used the paint on one of them which we splatted onto our plant . The actual spaceship design itself we used the other cardboard boxes by painting them, putting a robot computer on one of them to make it alieny computer .We went around our plants with a black marker pen so it stands outs better. I think we may have to finish it off. We had also had created a ship which Georgie drew it out of cardboard with a pencil, then we painted it in. This was for the pirates to use as they arrive on shore but I don't think we will be using this now . We have already filmed this part but we may have to re shoot some parts . We all got involved in designing the space ship so we painted , cut things out , helped each other working as a team on it.

For our first scene we did keep it to the original of what we said:  So where the pirates arrive on the beach, they search for the treasure and fall down the hole . This bit when the pirates fall down the hole  we did change it slightly. We decided for Captain Shipmate to fall down the hole. But instead of using sand to dig the hole we just dug up the stones and that made it kinda of a hole which he falls down into. But if we went to the further end down Lee on Solent, it would of looked better with the sand but oh well that didn't happen did it . Also in this we were meant to be having kids in our children's drama but this was a problem because we were meant to be filming at Netley beach but the kids don't finish till 3, the time they finished and they got into their costume and make up on it would be about 4 o'clock. Then we would of only had about 45 minutes to film and plus with the nights closing in now it will be getting dark allot sooner. We wouldn't of had enough time to make sure everything was okaey , learn the scripts , and plus we would of been rushing it ..... Which is not good !!! So that s why I had suggested of doing it during the day where we had the light and could set things up, have enough time to make it good instead of rushing it and to learn the scripts but this didn't really take long to do  .

The Script -
The first scene we did was down on the beach !! - But thinking of the script Georgie didn't say her line =/ . So instead we just moved around without talking trying to find the treasure .So that was slightly changed . The Script next was right but Georgie just added my name B.O to the end of it." Are you questioning my ability's to read maps "B.O. (In angry voice.) Where it says Captain Parrotless saying Arrgh !! we all decided to say it to make it a real piratey arrgh!! . Where Captain Parrotless says " That's better". "Now Shipmate , set up my chair and prepare me a drink " . We didn't have a chair we forgot about that one so we just used one of the posts for Captain Parrotless to sit down on and used a bottle of juice . We took out the last part of the first part of the scene with Shipmate says "shouldn't we did a hole near the x?"We  took the last bit out where Captain Parrotless was going to be saying to Captain Shipmate to did the hole .We changed it to Claudia digging the sand aka stones she found the treasure. Then Captain Parrotless walks over with Captain B.O (me),we look over to see what the treasure is.Then after that scene ( Captain B.O(me) was arguing about who was going down the whole with having a conversation with Captain Shipmate. B.O like I think  Captain Shipmate should go down the whole as he dugged it up . Then You see the shot of me pushing Captain Shipmate in the hole. We did change different lines slightley with the different characters, we did take some scenes out as well as it wiould of took us a while to do , so we just cutted it down by shorting it still keeping the story line but in  different way .

The last scene is where the pirates are back on land . We have changed the script again as all the pirates yea fine but the aliens .... We were meant to have kids so Claudia was going to be alien with Shannon as well with her cousins friend. But since we had a problem with the kids starring in it. So Shannon did the camera work that day whilst me ,Georgie was pirates anyway we had Claudia as one as well. This was meant to be the part where they swap the kids with the others so the aliens without realizing they got muddled up. But we took that bit out of the swapping the kids . The last bit of our fourth scene is where me , Georgie and Claudia are waving of the aliens in the sky . We changed it slightly towards the end we still waving of the aliens but we didn't say the last bit of that scene arrgh!! So we may have to film that bit again .

In the studio on the 9th November we started filming in the studio . It went really well when we were filming . We used our props so our cardboard boxes of our alien spaceship , we used jewellery , crown for the props for the alien when she finds the treasure which is misleading . We used the spotlights on the main wall for the focus of our alien spaceship with the different coloured spotlights.Shannon was an alien she put black paint on her with spots on her to make her look alieney. Also with a piece of tin foil on top of her hair to give her that alien look . She was really good acting like an alien . Claudia and my role was to be the pirates , Claudia was wearing  .Claudia was playing a good character as she had this like pirate voice ... Me it didn't go as good with the voice as it didn't sound piarety blue top, jeans , eye patch, hook hand to maker her look like a pirate. Then me I had black /white top with a skeleton necklace , red banana , boots and pirate sword to make me look like an actual pirate.We had good fun filming in the studio we messed up a few times so we had to retake some shots . It didn't take us that long to film in the studio as we just literally got on with it . It went really well we worked together to get it done which is now finally done .Yey!!

Now were in the editing process !!
whoo !! We started editing today after filming 9/11/2011 . We did have few minor problems as we had a  SD card but it didn't have a card reader on that computer, so we had to copy everything to the hard drive so our original footage from the beach , and transfer the footage onto the hard drive and put it onto a another computer .Then the renaming was arrgh because we had allot of footage,then you got to rename it all individual which takes forever. After all of that it was editing our footage on adobe premier is the programme which we use to edit. I like editing , I enjoy it , once you get into it it's easy . It did take a while to get into the right order as it was all jumbled up , so this took a bit of time to get it in the right order.

At the moment of our footage we have muted the sound of where you see the panning shot nicely done with the pirates on the beach looking for the treasure .The next shot is where Captain O.B makes a  question about her abilities to read the map. You have a nice mid shot of me. Georgie (Captain Parrotess  is talking to O.B, The camera we used was mid shot of her.The next shot is Georgie and Claudia scene we have an over shoulder view of the map. Then we had an over shoulder view of all the pirates saying arrgh. Captain Parrotless chucks the map on the ground , where it had landed on the X ( which we used to scarf to make the cross we had put stones to hold it down so it didn't blow away.We had a close up down shot of the cross where the map had landed . In the background we have the sound of our feet of  us arriving to the cross with the map . This shot was good of the sounding of our feet as we arrive to the cross where the treasure is . Then we had another over the shoulder view of me and Claudia where were were agreeging with the captian. We have a long shot of Captian Parrotless and Captian Shipmate( Claudia). Then few hours past we had a shot of Georgie giving Claudia the spade to dig the hole this shot was mid shot.Captian Shipmate is  digging the hole , we had a wide shot of her moving in close when she is digging for the treasure . You see me and Georgie looking over the hole curoisility. Then Captain B.O has an argument of who goes down the while I thought  this was good of us as the pirates with our piratey accent which I thought my voice was better at the beach then in the studio . We used a wide shot of us , which creates a nicely shot of us with the sea behind us in the background . Then we had a shot of a low angle of me Pushing Claudia in the hole , this was funny the way she falling it was so funny . Then the shot is where Claudia is in the spaceship where she's falling down.

  The next scene is in the treasure hole . she is whoa "where am i ?" "Captian , B.O?" , she soon realizes she is in the alien spaceship . The shot after that is where me and Claudia are slowly getting up are like arrgh , very confused where they are . The next shot is where we are com fronted by the alien , who is Shannon with her alien voice which was really good . We have it like panning over as she is walking to us .The camera  moves to us with confused faces. Then you have a shot of me where I'm like arn't u meant to be alien? .  My bad voice , we had  a shot of me on the side when I'm talking to Shannon . You have a angle shot of Shannon Greeting us reminds me of jack in the box that was funny with how she moved her hands . I couldn't stop laughing when she was talking in her alien voice which we had to retake few times of me laughing . It was hard to keep a straight face especially for me . Then  Shannon is like the key the key this was funny where Claudia has the key she pointing . Claudia was like looking at her boobs as we shot that .... The shot we used was over shoulder shot , then a close up of the key on Claudia 's neck .The next shot is where B.O and Shipmate have the treasure in there hands with a close up of our shock faces.

The last scene  -beach  is with me , Georgie ,and Claudia with us three all looking up from the alien spaceship waving off the aliens . We had a behind high angle shot of the sky and us waving the aliens off . Saying "bye"

5 November 2011

My review on footloose 2011 !!









I have chosen to do my review on Footloose 2011 (the latest one!!) I have chosen do this because I have seen it at the cinema , it is a really good film to watch if your into like the dancing side of it. It has a  twist of line dancing (country music) and rocking roll too . It's got amazing actor who Starr's in it who is Kenny Wormald who is amazing dancer who shares his dancing with Julianne Houge . It's an incredible film to watch for everyone as it brings fun, enjoyment, laughter to our screens. It makes you want to get up and dance.

Footloose is a very positive film for everyone to watch as it brings fun, enthusiasm, energetic to our screens which everyone will love and enjoy. Footloose has created a new style and twist for 2011. Footloose has brought a dance, rock and roll and line dancing to our screens with the freshness of a whole new vibe for 2011. Footloose is mainly about this new guy called Ren who is from the city and moves to a small town. He meets this girl called Ariel for the first time; you see she takes a shine to him. He comes to this town where rock and roll and the dancing have been banned. (Previous where a group of young teenagers are having fun dancing around, enjoying themselves. It makes you want to get up and dance and get involve. Then the teenagers get into the car with the music blaring up having fun.... not paying attention to the road and bang they get hit by this truck and they all died) So this is why it had got banned of this terrible disaster as friends from the community lost their loved ones from this.

Ren as the new guy in town he starts to struck us with his moves as he shakes up the town with him bringing back how the town was before the terrible disaster. The small place is known for its dancing and rocking roll side to it and its back with a whole new sensational twist.It's first day of school ....Ren gets out of the car looking good with the whole sunglasses look Mr.cool. Ariel smiling at him and says "he’s cute". I think they make a lovely couple just the way she looks at him. Ren's got admirer who just doesn't know it yet till it all gets revealed. The funny bit when Ren goes into school and he bumps into this guy the conversation started of......

Willard: "Where you from?" "You talk funny".

Ren: "I talk funny?" "You should hear you from my end."

Willard: "What's up man I'm Willard."

I thought this was really nice way to meet someone as he bumped into Willard . They had that coversation above and from there like best of friends. It's nice that he's got a friend to talk to and hang out with. First days of school is a bit scary especially when you don't know anyone . But Ren made a true friend and they always hang out with each other . You can see they have a really good bond with each other it's good to see how there realtionship is really strong .Ren is truly grateful that he’s uncle (he’s family have taking him in after a long loss of his mother passing away from leukaemia. It's nice that his family has taking him in after his mothers death because no one can cope with that on their own. He soon finds out of the ban on the dancing. He is shocked by this about the dancing being banned for under eighteens to dance. Ren like are you "kidding me". Ariel sees Ren walking out of school; she takes a shine to him again checking him out. But he is nice though, him playing the main role as he is a sensational dancer to watch and very talented as you can see on the screen. He knows how’s to move I’ll give you that.

Ren soon becomes very attracted to Ariel but she’s going out with a guy called Chuck the dirt track guy. Ren is soon playing a game of chicken but with buses. They all set there stations and they have to knock of each other of their buses so they can win the game. Ren being fast, aggressive, in his driving knocks the other players of the track which is pretty cool to watch with the special effects to make it so real. He knocks everyone off the track leaving one more person to knock of which is Chuck who he hates.You can tell this by the way they act towards each other. Then there both crashing into each other with Ren's ability of not so good at driving. He tilts up Chuck’s bus and it crashes down on the ground. Then Ren's bus is out of control as he can't put the brakes down because something went wrong. So the bus is out of control he tries to turn it and Chuck and Ariel are standing there half burned to death from the smoke and Ren jumps out before it crashes. The crash affect was really good with the smoke and everything going up into flames just like it would happen in an action pack movie. Ariel liked the way he handled it in the race and she was very impressed by him.

Ren goes to this cafe place and soon finds out that it's just not a normal town it's the town with a full of people dancing away with the energetic , the passion , the wreck less side of it .Ren takes to the floor in the car park with his amazing moves and he can dance .... Incredible to watch. He brings something to the pack. Ariel joins in and they get really into it with each other. Like they were together with the passionate, sexy, dancing. It's very romantic, passionate touch to it as Ariel does really like him but Ren does like her but she has a boyfriend which Chuck gets angry and annoyed that he’s dancing with his girlfriend. Ren soon realizes that Ariel just making a show to her boyfriend to make him jealous. He’s not that type of guy to do that. Ren is so annoyed and you can see this in his face. You just want to go up and hug him who wouldn't right.

Ariel dad doesn't like the fact she’s hanging around with him Ren  because he thinks he’s trouble. But he's not trouble he had two runs in with the police of having his music too loud which is hardly a crime. Getting ticked for that its stupid. They go to this barn yard dancing place it looks really good fun. Willard girlfriend asks him to dance with her but he’s likes "you go on and dance and I’ll get the drinks". Ren says "you’re not going to sit around and mope are you?" Wallard like "I don't dance he whispers to Ren that he can't dance. You think to yourself awwh he probably can dance but he's afraid of what people think of him dancing ... You see Ariel and Ren on the dance floor dancing away is incredible too see them dance so fast and they all move at the same time it's amazing to watch. You can see in Ariels face that she's having a really good time with Ren.Ren he’s getting in to it  striking us with his country music moves. He's incredible dancer well they all are. It makes you just want to jump out of your seat and get up and dance and join in the fun which it certainly does. You can see they love spending time together as there smiling away having fun which is so sweet as they really like each other and their enjoying life to the max .

You see that Chuck is beating up his own girlfriend. He is very violent towards her. This is not nice at all. It's all because she’s been hanging around with the new guy Ren .Chuck is a women beater, who would want to go out with that?.No wonder why she’s been hanging around with Ren because he's  a lovely guy , charming, fun to be around and on the other hand there's Chuck so I don't blame her for going with Ren he’s so much more then a man then Chuck will ever be . She gets so angry she starts to whack his car Chuck's likes "no" but good on her. Chucks car is ruined as hell and he storms of in his car. Ariel on the floor who can barley move abused to hell by her evil boyfriend.

Miles tellor who plays Willard is a funny actor and he made me laugh when Ren was teaching Willard to dance. He had some young girls singing he was in the background of them trying to do some line dancing he was coming up with these different impressions of animals and dancing was so funny bless him. At least he had go it was so much fun watching him. Willard was dancing in the corridors in school and in the room dancing away. It looked like he was having  fun enjoying himself which I was too. He brings happiness, fun ,  within his character that what makes it a good film when there is funnest involve and it makes the audience have fun too. He looked great in his new outfit of country dancing.


Ren goes to this place where he can be wreck less and just let all his anger out as you can see he does really like her. The way he moves it's a bit like street dance and like step up which he is sensationally an amazing dancer. He starts to rev up his anger and he just let's it all out. The way he does it in a dance way is amazing. He strips of his jacket and starts to sway and the street dance takes amence!! The way he jumps and dances is like a very urban style feel to it. The way he moves his body is so fast but with emotions as you can see all raging anger, upset and annoyed. The music in the background building up to the fast bit of him dancing is really good to watch. It's like the tension building up in the music and that what makes it good to watch.

It's really nice they go to prom together Ariel and Ren dancing the night away, you can see the way they look at each other in the eyes. It's really passionate they really like each other you just want them to get together. It's really good that they bring happiness to our screens. We all love a romance film. Then Ren goes outside he finds out that Chuck is there waiting for him to beat him up. However Willard and Ren get into it and start beating the day lights out of them which you see them all whacking each other and kicking them to the ground. Chuck is a horrible guy who likes beating people up just because well I think that he is jealous that Ariel going out with the new guy Ren and hates seeing people happy  I don't like him at all.

Later on Ren goes to the minister and demands to bring footloose back where the town is well known for all this crazy dancing, country music but with all the twists. He explains that it be a good idea to bring it back. They are going to abolish the stupid rules and bring back the liveliness back of footloose. He is so sorry of what happened about the kids of what happened to them. He reasons with all them to how it wouldn't be the same without all this going on. Then the minister agrees to let the dance be unbanned everyone overwhelmed by this. It's nice to see how the town can be back to how it was before. He goes off somewhere with his true love and shares a romantic passionate moment as the sun goes down as you see this you have like the love shape of them coming through as the sun comes through them which makes it very romantic and it shows there love for one another . Footloose is back!!

Overall!!
Footloose is for all ages it brings the romantic, happy, lively, motivated of an incredible sensation of a production. It has some great twists with all the dancing which was extremely good fun for everyone to join in. It's a nice story line of a guy coming to a town and then he meets a girl falls in love with her and shares his hidden talent of  dancing which he is very passionate about. It creates a good romantic film of Footloose so I would recommend it to everyone if they haven't seen it already they should go and see it it's amazing film. I liked that they have done a remake of footloose it gives us that freshness of new taste to our screens. I would give this a rating of 5 stars because it was that good better than I expected. I fully enjoyed it, I would go and see it again. It also brings excitement too because you don't know what’s going to happen next!! It's got really good actors and actress who starred in it which brought this production together to make it fun, enjoyable, funny, exciting to watch!

who publishes reviews !!

Reviews !!

Magazines
- zoo
- nut
- kerrang
- Games
- The empire

Newspapers
-The sun
-Telegraph
-The times
-Express
-The mail

Internet
- Youtube
- Ebay
- Argos

Product
- DVD
- Food
- Yellow pages (website)

Mobiles
- App Store

The sun is for a wide audience as people read newspapers everyday !!
The telegraph , The mail , Express and The times are written by jounalists so someone who writes stuff which they can be bias .
The internet - everyoneone can write reviews
DVDs can be postitive !!
Magazines can be written by  a person journalist who writes magazines and also be from wide audience of what people think of a  film by getting their own opinion about it or even from a guys perspective as there more into games - get reviews of people who play games !!
Products can be positive/negative


notes on reviews !! - purpose of reviews !!

SHOULD

- Have good points and bad points , unbiase
- Make sure you keep on topic !!
- Explain ( describe in detail what you are talking about !!
- Express your own opinion !!
- Think of a good top set audience !!
- Use a appropiate language
- Proof read work!!

SHOULDN'T DO

- Insult the people you are reviewing
- Don't sensationalise - Don't go off subject
- Don't repeat what you have already said
- Don't make it too personal
- Don't be too manipulated ( hidden adgenda)
-  Don't make the review short !!
- Don't make it boring - give detail in a good context !!

3 November 2011

DOS & DONTS when pitching your presentation !!

The dos and don'ts of communication skills and presentation skills when pitching your idea to the rest of the audience!!

DOS!!
- Smile
- Be positive
- Be confident
- Eye Contact to everyone ( moving the eye around )
- Keep on track on what you are saying
- Give out information in detail so it keep the audience informed of what you going to do and how youre going to achieve it
 - Be proffessional about it think about it being a job and why you should have that job - obviously giving your idea opinion about what you are going to do .
- Should be struckted and flow nicely
-Humor - so it makes the audience feel at ease with you
- Speak nice and clear when your talking
- Capture the audiences attention, make them interested in your pitch - communicating with them so for e.g pictures , maps , flowing slides that smooth of after each other .
- Keep to the key points of your pitch when showing your presentation and progress that when giving your pitch to an audience .
-Maybe give out handouts of what your going to be talking about in your pitch so the audience get a rough idea of what your going to be talking about .
-Maybe a questonnaire maybe good to find out what people liked about your presentation so the pros and cons of it and what they thought overall of the presentation.
- Keep the audience interested in your subject when giving your pitch
- Use pictures , diagrams , locations pictures which could help with your pitch backed up evidence!!
- Keep the presentstion formal
- Make it good when pitching your idea and work together .

DONTS!!
- Don't be stupid about it
- Don't blag on about something if you dont need to
- Don't hide away so for e.g don't have the paper up against your face because the audience won't be able to hear you of what you are saying .
-So don't lack in effort - so try your best to give a good presentation
- Don't look at the board when speaking to the audience
- Don't just read of the paper - thats not really good to do
- Don't make it one words when speaking...   a lack of effort not really good can come across boring if your not communicating with your audience .
- Don't make it boring - put effort into it
- Don't put too much on your powerpoint just keep it to the key points
- Don't be nervous ( well try not to be which out nerves can get the better of us !!
- Don't lack in confidence - as you can do it
- Don't make the audience fall asleep - boring , for e.g bland pitches, which will not make the audience feel interested in the subject of what your trying to get across .
- Don't look full eyed on someone as that canbe scary
- Don't mumble in what your saying
- Don't move around when speaking to the audience
- Don't be annoying so for e.g a pen tapping on the table can be irritating ... people do that when there nervous or do something else
- Don't swear
-Don't look down on the floor when giving your pitch - look up

prezi - presentation

http://prezi.com/0b36m3f8ea9v/pitch/

2 November 2011

Reasearch background material !!


                                                                                               Interview - On Internet Saftey !!
 I just asked someone of what they think of the internet , what they use it for  , if they keep their personal data protected online , what they use the internet for , if they the internet is safe to use , it was just generall questions really about the internet !!!                                                                                            

1.       Why do you think it’s important to keep your personal details to yourself?


They’re personal for a reason... Because you don’t want anyone else to get hold of them and use them for fraud.

2.       Do you think the internet is safe? If yes say why?


Aspects of it are; successful websites/ companies have expectations to maintain and could be sued costly amounts/ lose profit if they can’t live up to their expectations. It’s your responsibility to be careful

If No say why?


There are sites out there, nasty websites. They can misuse your personal information- along with other users of the site and their behaviour.

3.       Do you go on dating sites?

No.

4.       What do you use the internet for?


Homework, socialising, blogging, and music

5.       Do you use the same password for each account you have?


Yes, I shouldn’t really but I do!


6.       Do you think protecting yourself is important if so give a reason why?

Definitely! There are things on the web that I really don’t need to see


 7. Do you have your setting s private? If so what setting do you have it on?


Yeah I have mine on private.

8 . Do you ever talk to people you don’t know online?


Yeah, mutual friends. If I don’t have a clue who they are and they seem a bit dodgy I decline their friend requests, even if it is a bit harsh.

 9 . Do you ever do online shopping?

No.

10 . Do you keep safe online? If so how do you?


I don’t give out my password and I don’t search/ post anything I shouldn’t.


11 .Do you have protection software on your computer?


Errm I’m not too sure, probably.


2 .Have you ever been cyber bullied online?
1
No.


14 .If you haven’t do you know what to do if this occurred?


Yeah you should report it, and block and delete that person(s).




15 .Do you think online shopping is safe? If so why



It depends if it’s a well trusted site. New Look etc would be fine, but I wouldn’t give out card details to a store I’ve never heard before!

If no why?

As always, there are fake websites out there just to get your details and take your money... Be careful!


16 .Would you ever put your bank details online?


If it’s a reliable site.


If yes why?


Major companies wouldn’t rip you off, it’d be bad publicity and they’d make far less money this way, so there’s no point, really.